My main criticism is that you make no use of course resources in this essay. To make full use of course resources is a major part of the assignment description. Especially here, this essay needs to be in dialog with the definition of compromise given in course materials.
As far as your empirical claim that most people prefer the single life, I think that is false. You should restate that as: some prefer the single life on the grounds that…
I want you to edit my (theory_essay_1.docx) and make it the same as the professor’s comment. Also it have to be in a dialectic essay and more than 900 words. and organize the essay
i did attached the dialectic essay method and the course document and my theory essay 1 that i need you to added it.